An updated excerpt from my novella in progress, The Jump. (10/6/2015)

The following is taken from my novella in progress, The Jump. I’ve recently been able to begin working on it once more, so here’s what I have so far, from what is currently the end of chapter two and the entirety of chapter three (actually three and four if you count the recently-written prologue, but the fate of that chapter is still ambiguous). If you have any criticisms of any kind, please share them, I’d love to hear them so I can improve my work. I’m hoping to self-publish it as an eBook later this year if all goes well.

The cover for my eBook, drawn by the talented Mathias Gabriel.
The cover for my eBook, drawn by Mathias Gabriel.

“Pfft… we’re rebels, remember? We can do what we want,” Karen retorted playfully as she winked at him.

He let out a frustrated sigh and tilted his head as he was walked between the twin rows of pods, defeated. Looking at him, she could the see that her word choice was poor. Rebels. He had probably never considered himself as such. For a majority of his lifespan, they had fought to uphold the ideals of the federation, and he had been fighting far longer than her. Justice was the one thing in which he believed, it was all he ever cared about. Whether it was still the cause for which he fought was unclear to her.

As they walked back to their pods, they looked over the sleeping bodies of their comrades frozen in time. Hemsley, Paisley, Rookson, Phillips, Jones, Marshall, Jackson, Fitzroy and all the rest… all there. All men and women with similar ideals, all brought together aboard the shoddily scrapped-together Shadowbreaker for one suicide mission.

In that moment, they found themselves frozen, too. They stood there watching them sleep for several long, silent seconds. It had just occurred to them that nearly everyone they cared about was in that room. It also occurred to them in that moment that they could all perish in the coming months.

A feeling of moroseness made its way through both of them as the gravity of their situation began to drag them down. They had passed the point of no return seven long years ago in the blink of an eye. Now they were teetering on the edge of self-doubt and foolish brazenness. But no matter what the odds, they’d have to pull through. They continued to walk down the corridor toward the end of the row until Karen stopped dead in her tracks. Lost in thought, she almost missed the peculiarity of the pod she had just passed. Almost.

Karen suddenly stopped and rubbernecked. She had a horrible feeling in her gut. She turned slowly to the pod directly beside hers. Her eyes widened and her mouth formed an ‘O’ shape as she slowly crept toward it. There was no doubt about it.

“Oh god….” Karen was trembling.

Conrad turned and rushed to her side. Looking past her, he could see the problem. The pilot’s head was twisted and his arms were contorted and shrivelled in an almost pretzel-like fashion. From his mouth, blue liquid flowed. His eyes were immobile and lifeless, half-open and utterly devoid of that unmistakable spark of life. They were sire he was dead. The mission had claimed its first casualty.

“Th-this… how?” Karen stammered as she tried to come to grips with the situation. “Did the pod malfunction? How could it? It, it it wasn’t l-like this when we… was it? Oh god….”

“This wasn’t a malfunction, Daniels,” Conrad was speaking in a hushed tone again. “This was sabotage.”

“Sabotage!? How can you be so certain?”

Daniels was starting to scream now. Panic was beginning to set in. They hadn’t even arrived at their destination and already they had suffered a casualty. It felt surreal, like an ongoing nightmare.

“I’m not. It’s just a feeling,” Conrad said, still whispering. “Check the pods.”


“You heard me. Check ’em.”

She moved toward the pods with a slight trepidation, trembling as she looked over each one. Karen investigated the left-hand side whilst Conrad looked over the right, but not before Conrad did a double take in the direction of young Richard’s pod.

Not him. Not him. God, anyone but him.

He examined and re-examined Richard’s pod for any anomalies. It was a process that took only seconds, but they were long, agonising seconds. Seconds in which a hostile entity could be prowling the same walls as them. Seconds which could very well lead into the final minutes of their lives. Finally, after a thorough inspection of the pod, he concluded with confidence that it was untampered, and the pilot within was secure.

Thank Christ.

He continued down the row. After Karen’s pod was Richard, which he had just examined. After his was Marshall’s, followed by Nelson’s, followed by-

There was a shriek. A brief, muffled one, but a shriek nonetheless. It was Daniels’ shrill voice crying out in the darkness. Conrad spun around with all the intensity of a dervish and none of the grace. He found Daniels standing between the pods of Haggarty and Williams, both of which were just past Carter’s pod.

They were both dead. He knew that in an instant. Two high-ranking personnel, both murdered before they could even make their stand. That made three fallen pilots now: First Carter, and then Williams and Haggarty. He resolved himself to lose only one more: the bastard responsible.

He stood awkwardly in his row, looking side to side in desperation. As far as he could tell, they were alone. But one other warm body was awake on that vessel. Of that he was sure. Of where, he was not.

“Harry… they didn’t make it. What are we gonna do?” Her words hung in silence for several seconds.

“We can’t just stay here. Right now we’re sitting ducks, and worse, we’re unarmed.” Conrad said.

She rushed over to the next pod.  The vital signs of the next two were all clear.

“Fitzroy and Campbell are okay!” She whispered loudly.

Conrad did the same, and what he saw was shocking. There was no corpse interred within the stasis chamber, nor was there a living subject. The pod belonging to one Alan R. Jones was empty. Unlike the others, he wasn’t dead. He just wasn’t there.

Their Chief Engineer was missing.

“Daniels!” He was starting to yell, though his voice remained hushed and low.

“Yeah.” She said, not looking at him.

“Jones isn’t in his pod.”

Her head jerked upright and a scowl took over the better half of her face.

“Son of a bitch. You think it’s him?”

“Who else? Unless it’s one of us, it has to be Jones.”

“Dammit! I never did like the look of that guy.” She pursed her lips and looked down. “Okay… now what?

“Think Daniels. Where would Jones go? What would you do if you were Chief Engineer?”

She paused for a moment. “If I wanted to sabotage the mission? I’d head up to the bridge and change course, that’s what I’d do.”

“And if you suddenly heard the elevator being called?”

She stopped and stared into space. A dozen different scenarios started playing out in his head, but there was only one avenue of escape from the bridge he could have taken: the ventilation shafts. It would be far from conventional, but then their ship wasn’t conventional, either. Crawling through the vents  would be his only safe escape route. Taking the other elevator would definitely get him noticed. But the vents are dangerous, and to properly navigate the winding passageways of the Shadowbreaker‘s innards would no doubt take some time….

“The vents.”

They both looked up without saying another word. No thumping. No crashing. No slight rumbling. Nothing at all. Either he was out of the vents, or he wasn’t moving.

“Well… what now, big guy?”

“If I were Jones, I’d be headed toward the armoury.”

“So what? We head down there and let him blast us? The lock on the door won’t stop him, Harold! All he needs is one rifle and blam! We’re mincemeat in seconds.”

“But there’s the chance he hasn’t gotten there yet, in which case we need to get there first. Getting armed is our first priority. If he’s already beaten us there, then we’re already dead.”

The dire nature of their situation began to dawn on him then.

“And then what? We start a gunfight in the middle of the ship? Listen Harry-”

“Don’t call me that!” His frustration was beginning to peak.

“Just… listen. We head to the armoury now and we leave the pods wide open. If he’s already loaded himself up, he could just be waiting for us to leave. Then he lights up the pod bay while they’re asleep and we’re screwed.”

Conrad nodded. “But if we stay here, we’ll be on the defensive. And right now, I have a funny feeling he knows where we are.”

Things got quiet again. Jones had a reputation for being reliable, but socially inept. Whilst they were preparing in secrecy for their mission, the growing crew of the Shadowbreaker would often complain about strange bumping noises scattered around the ship. Eventually, the source of the sounds was traced to none other than Alan Jones, one of their best and brightest, recruited onto the mission for his many years of experience and utter brilliance in the field of mechanical engineering.

There was never really any reason for it; he just hid in the vents to get away from the others. After a short interrogation, Conrad had dropped the subject. He was never doing anything shady; he just didn’t particularly like people. He was always seen fidgeting in a group, and one crew member swore up and down he saw the man speaking to himself in the corner, but these too were dismissed as harmless quirks. Conrad had innocently assumed that the duress of their situation had been wearing him down. He never anticipated him becoming this unhinged and violent. Had he still been flying with the federation, he’d have been sent in for a thorough psyche evaluation. But they were a desperate lot, and competent crewmembers were difficult to come by, especially ones with years of naval service.

Conrad was now beginning to regret his previous executive decision to keep all weapons locked away. This was far from a professional venture, and as such, he had to agree to keep all of the weapons onboard locked away in the armoury. If he had his way, he, Daniels and Rookson would have all been placed in stasis with a sidearm. But there was distrust and even animosity amongst them. Most of them were punk kids who had nothing better to do, some of them were fed vets, a couple of them were mercs with nothing to lose, and one of them was a hacker for hire with a serious grudge against the government.

“If he’s still in the vents,” Daniels’ voice was at an all time low now. “He can probably hear us.”

“If he can hear us, he should know he’s dead meat.”

Another pause.

“So…. what’s the order, cap’n?”

There would be no more words. Their moves would have to be planned out very carefully from that moment on. Conrad motioned toward the twin set of hallways ahead of them at the end of the Stasis Pod Bay. They crept along until they reached the end of the narrow passageway that ended in the branching path, at which point Karen crept left and Richard right. The right side was a straight shot to the armoury, located on one’s left, just before the next corner. The left-hand hallway would take Karen past the sick bay before looping around a corner before looping to the armoury. If Conrad was correct in his assumption, they could trap the killer in a pincer attack as he tried to enter the armoury from an adjacent ventilation shaft window.

At least, that was the plan. It would only work if he hadn’t already reached that point. If he had, it wouldn’t really matter.

They parted ways at the opening, each going down a different corridor. Splitting up wasn’t Conrad’s first choice, but he was left with scant alternatives. Waking up the others for backup would take too long, and no amount of strength in numbers would help them if Jones could get his hands on a plasma rifle. A plasma rifle, he thought. That oughta be the least of my worries. We have a B3-771 in there. If he gets his hands on that thing, and he can turn it on….

He shuddered. There was no time to think about that. Up ahead, the door to the armoury came into view. The walls of this sector were carbon black. The door was a solid rectangular portal with a single screen beside it. As he walked toward it, he noted the ventilation shafts. One directly above and ahead, and another ahead and to the right. He stopped dead in his tracks and listened intently. He was sure he could hear the slightest sound of rustling overhead.

He took another step forward toward the armoury. Above him, a shaft opened in near silence. Conrad showed no reaction to this, and crept ahead another step. And another. And another. And one more before finally, he could hear faint breathing. He rotated on the balls of his feet in a fluid motion to face the security panel, and that’s when it happened.

Alan Jones dropped from the vents above like a bolt of lightning, but Harold Conrad sidestepped and retaliated with all the force of booming, crackling thunder. For a brief moment, he could see the ferocity and tenacity in Jones’ eyes. It was a look of pure terror.

Conrad stepped to the side and swept his leg, causing Jones to drop to the floor. He fell, but caught himself and bounced up, revealing a brilliant ultra-vibration blade, the oscillating frequency of which could cut through limbs in a single slash provided enough force was applied. In the past, he had thrown it across a room at an enemy soldier who was about to fire at Richard. The strength of his throw was enough to cleave the arm completely in two.

Now all that high-tech power was being directed toward Conrad’s face. With a shrill cry, Jones gritted his yellow teeth and lunged forward.


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